1) it is…which改成it is …that

2) thus变成as

3) 删去how

4) the more的前面应该有and

5) specially变成especially

6) dominated变成dominating

7) make变成offer或者conduct,

8) 改法1:删去some;该法2:保留some skills, 在ability的前面加the

9) specialized应该变成specialize

10) in the manner of改成in the way of