学员: 老师,你好!P44完形填空23题 为什么选择with,我看不明白,请分析一下,个人认为选and。
  Tn fact,it is growing so quickly that our telephone numbering system needs re-organising with some major changes will have to be made.
  老师回复:Tn fact,it is growing so quickly that our telephone numbering system needs re-organising with some ajor changes will have to be made.
  AND是并列关系
  而此句话是说我们的电话号码系统需要再调整,而这种再调整必须有很大的变化如果用AND,则表示我们的电话号码系统需要再调整并且在.有一些很大的变化,从英语的角度并没有说清楚...变化
  学员: P36 4
  Sales of adventure games increased steadily from 1995 to 1998.Sales of action games increased steadily from 1995 to 1997,peaked at 25% in 1997,and then droped sharply.Sales of sports games droped by 10% in 1996,remained steady in 1996 and 1997,but increased by 5% in 1998.Sales of other games remained steady in 1995 and 1996 before a slight drop in 1997,and then recovered in 1998.
  老师回复:Sales of adventure games increased steadily from 1995 to 1998.Sales of action games increased steadily from 1995 to 1997应该用不同的词来表述GO UP,peaked at 25% in 1997,and then droped sharply.Sales of sports games droped by 10% in 1996,remained steady in 1996 and 1997,but increased by 5% in 1998.Sales of other games remained steady in 1995 and 1996 before a slight drop in 1997,and then recovered in 1998.
  表达很清楚,非常不错不足之处是应该用不同的上升和下降的词汇表达一个词汇用几遍显得很罗嗦,建议改正。
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